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[the birthday song]

VEC ftw..

I'm gonna be totally honest with you. Normally it's good to use 1 minute to build up expectations, but this gets boring.
I've heard lots of songs with the same "fills and sounds" from the very same samplepacks. You have great instruments. Why don't you use them better?

-The buildup could have included more earcandy instead of being that predictable.
-Just a preview (so it won't get any points without takeoff/melody)
-Add more variations.

Happy birthday btw :)

CLKIN responds:

Thanks ^_^
Meh,i had to show something on my birthday,ya know...
I'll work on it soon.

[Sky Shift]

Hey!

As for a starter, I really enjoyed the melody though I believe you could've put far more work into it than this. This melody has potentionals to become a kickass dancetrack in Gigi D'agostino style. Work with this :)

Keep up the good work :)

ElectricalBypass responds:

LoL. "you spin me right round...." anyways. I will keep that in mind. I was planing on making a remix.

[Karco - Contrast]

Hey!

This is kickasspwn work xD
I love the brutal sound! Reminds me of a tranceparty I attended last year. "Sense Your Mind" when I jumpstyled my ass off on the dancefloor:p

The only contructive criticism I can come up with is, to me it seems like a there's still missing some mastering. Besides that.. it's a fat track xD

.::Keep Up The Good Work!::.

Karco responds:

The brutal sound was EXACTLY what I was going for! :D Glad you liked it.

The mixing/mastering of this song wasn't nearly my best, I've learned a ton since then - compare it to something more recent, i.e. my remix of Paradise on E, and you'll see what I mean. You can also go back to the first few pages of reviews where I probably explained things more in-detail.

Thanks for the review!

[Ameno Instrumental(FoxtacyMIX)]

Hey!

I like the idea of this remix, but I think you could have put alot more work into this tbh:)

-Add more variations to make it more interesting.
-Master the track a tad better as the whole picture seems a tad blury..
-Maybe replace the flangered sawlead ?

Keep up the good work though :)

Foxtacy responds:

wow thank you, i appreciate your tips... i really have to work out a little more on the effects i use on my songs... :(

[Brass [Extended House Mix]]

Sweet

Not my daily choice of style I pick for my ears, but this is catchy and chill:) I could be more constructive, but I don't know this genre that well.. so that leaves me only a personal opinion. Keep up the good work:)

muflubbagon1 responds:

Hey thanks a lot dude.

[Cayur - Achaia]

Impressed

You got skills, that's for sure. I think "The-Indifferent-One" said it all :p
I noticed when the guitar started playing around 2:00.. is it a tad detoned compared to the rest? Or is it supposed to be like that?
Nevertheless, it works either ways I guess :p

sculpted-cold responds:

:D

Thank you, sir! Yeah, it's got some accidentals in it. I think I might turn it down just a hair, though.

[Paradise in your eyes]

Chill, but catchy :)

My first thought when I read, "It was my first song with my voice" I got a little..well, you know:p 90% of all tracks on NG are terrible productions. BUT.. this isn't one of them xD.
Keep the vocals and productions coming :)

Krupinkin responds:

Thank you! I am very happy that you've found it interesting :)